Monday, 30 May 2016

The Wonder Tree

imgres-7.jpgThe Wonder Tree
By:Rashha
Once upon a time someone worked in the florist she did not have any flowers then one day she asked an old man he gave her a seed has lots of flowers. She grew it so much. On the flower it said"feed me weed me water me well what will I grow to who can tell? So one day a tree came she tried to do something but when she did something she got 100 flowers in her shop she always it they lived happily ever after!
In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting I feel proud because I know how to spell I need to improve on my punctuation.







2 comments:

Ghezal Farhat said...

Great Work Rashha

Bridget Platt said...

Keep working hard to add lots of detail to your stories. Mrs Platt and Mrs Robertson.