Wednesday, 17 August 2016

WALT add descriptive language through our senses

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i used my senses (see, touch, feel, taste and hear)to add detail to my writing.

i feel proud because i used my punctuation right.

next time i will write more.

3 comments:

Tayla said...

I love your movie it is so cool

Bridget Platt said...

Excellent work adding detail through your senses. Your story is very interesting.

Ghezal Farhat said...

awesome work Rashha, I loved your story and detail!