Fractured Fairy tale

MY REFLECTION

I have been learning to write a fractured fairy tale using what  have learnt about narrative structured and features. my Fractured fairy tale was  based on Snow White. My Next step is to Make my end better by adding more detail. 

Character Desciption

Character Description Refection

W.a.l.t  write a character description using adjectives.  I found this picture hard to describe because i ran out of adjectives.  I used my 5 senses to write 5 different sentences about my character.  My next step is to find more interesting adjectives.

Comparing Fairy Tales

My Reflection

I have been learning to identify common themes in fairy and fractured tales Little Red Riding Hood and Into the forest. A common theme I made from these stories was they both had red clothes. I found this tricky because I had never done this before.  My next step is to Read more fractured tales.

Change Sigular Nouns to Plural

Persuasive Speech Research Popplet

My Reflection
I have been learning to find information about my speech topic.
I used Instagrok and other websites to research my speech topic which is bullying.  I found this interesting because I wanted to learn more about bullying.  My next step is to plan my speech.

Features of Persuasive Writing.

My Reflection

We have been learning to identify the features of persuasive writing . I found this tricky because this was my first time doing it.  Something I learnt was what groups of three was.  My next step is to write a persuasive speech.

How to capture a dragon

My Reflection

We have been learning about the structure and order of writing an explanation  We had to put the piece of writing in the correct order.  i found this tricky because i had never done explanations before.  My next step is to write my own explanation.

100 Word Challenge

My Reflection

I have been learning to add  detail to my writing.  We had to imagine we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture.  I used punctuation to make my writing more interesting.  My next step is to use language features like similes onomatopoeia and alliteration.

A Moment in time

My Reflection

I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing  

My Pepeha Art

This is my Pepeha art. A Pepeha is a way of introducing your self in Maori. I have included my maunga (mountain), my awa (river), my culture and a place that is special to me. My favourite part was to colour my Pepeha in. I loved  this artwork.    

My Antonym Diamante Poem

My Reflection
I have been learning to write a Antonym Diamante Poem.
An antonym is a word that is the opposite of a word.
A diamante poem is a poem that is in a diamond shape.
I found this hard because I couldn't think of any verbs for the poem. My next step is to choose interesting words not boring words.

My Metaphor Poem

 My Reflection
I have been learning to use metaphors to make it more interesting by making pictures in the readers head.
I got a lot better at using metaphors.
My next step is to explain why or how you are the thing you compare yourself to.

My Biopoem

My Reflection

We have been learning about a biopoem. A biopoem is a poem written about ourselves.
It has a special structure that we had to use to write our poems.
I found this hard because I couldn't find 3 words to describe me.  My next step is to write at least 3 things for each thing.

WALT build simple sentences too add more description to our writing.

Reflection

I am learning to build my sentences by adding more detail.

I think it helps makes my story interesting to read. Next time I want to add more words from the wow wall and more description.

WALT add detail to a character.

Reflection

i felt proud because i added some detail to my monster.

next time i want to draw a more interesting monster.

WALT add descriptive language through our senses

i used my senses (see, touch, feel, taste and hear)to add detail to my writing.

i feel proud because i used my punctuation right.

next time i will write more.

Making Butter

The Wonder Tree

The Wonder Tree

By:Rashha

Once upon a time someone worked in the florist she did not have any flowers then one day she asked an old man he gave her a seed has lots of flowers. She grew it so much. On the flower it said"feed me weed me water me well what will I grow to who can tell? So one day a tree came she tried to do something but when she did something she got 100 flowers in her shop she always it they lived happily ever after! In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting I feel proud because I know how to spell I need to improve on my punctuation.

Reflection for writing

In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because I know how to spell. I need to improve on my punctuation.

My Fanatic Weekend